"Developing excellent communication skills is absolutely essential to effective leadership. The leader must be able to share knowledge and ideas to transmit a sense of urgency and enthusiasm to others. If a leader can't get a message across clearly and motivate others to act on it, then having a message doesn't even matter." - Gilbert Amelio, former President and CEO of National Semiconductor Corp. By referring to this paragraph, here are some of our thoughts: To be able to become a great leader, developing essential communication skills is very important. Being a leader means that you are in charge of a group of people to complete a task. T he ability to share your own experiences and knowledge, will set a unified goal in mind among you and your workers will greatly impact their quality of work and overall morale. Having the essential communication skills to bri...
Yo Dylan, here's some feedback for your pitch
ReplyDelete- The content in terms of your experiences is great and detailed, however I think you can try to link them back in more detail, as in how does it directly relate to what you can do in a company
- Your voice is kind of soft, so I think you can afford to speak up a little bit more.
- The organisation of your content is really well done, I could easily tell which parts are your points, explanations and examples respectively.
Hope you take this into consideration and good luck if you plan to repitch for the competition!
Also, easy top 10 pitch right here by Dylan.
ReplyDeleteI feel that the delivery, usage of conjunctions and pacing was controlled and smooth.
ReplyDeleteContent was sufficient, however, I could see you refering to a script from time to time which may not seem as professional.
Overall, solid pitch, hope you get top 10 for the competition:)
Thank you, Dylan, for the informative vodcast!
ReplyDeleteThe structure is good, having just enough elaboration for each point. All points are also relevant and are well explained as to how they relate to the job. Talking pace is just right and words are clearly articulated. However, during the part about NS and communication there seems to be some small errors in grammar. I think that a short conclusion to tie together the whole pitch would also make the pitch even better.
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